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Friday, August 14, 2020
Before & After
We were learning about how to make apost better.
I found it easy to find the pictures of the things that I liked.
I found it hard to not used words.
I really enjoyed making a poster.
Next time I need to listen to the instructions beta.
Hi Ariana my name is Avie I am a year seven and I attend Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked your work,maybe next time slow it down a bit and write a bit more info about what it is. You may want to add a catchy title to hook the reader in. Did you struggle with the timing? Other wise it looks really cool.- Thanks, Avie
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Hi im Andre from Awapuni school and I really liked your work but next time maybe slow it down.
ReplyDeleteHi Ariana my name is Avie I am a year seven and I attend Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked your work,maybe next time slow it down a bit and write a bit more info about what it is. You may want to add a catchy title to hook the reader in. Did you struggle with the timing? Other wise it looks really cool.- Thanks, Avie
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